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Old 03-20-2018, 08:58 PM
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Default Leia's Theme - John Williams

It still needs some work for sure, but thought I'd share it coming along.
It's certainly not perfect so all feedback is appreciated. Thanks!

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Old 03-25-2018, 03:57 PM
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Hey Phen!
Sounds great!

I played the original John Williams track and noticed that the beginning of yours, the oboe comes in a bit too early compared to Johnny-boy's

Other than that, sounds pretty spot on to me!
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Old 03-29-2018, 05:32 PM
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I really appreciate the feedback! And thanks for bringing the oboe to my attention. I hadn't noticed that at all.
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Old 04-11-2018, 03:09 PM
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Lovely!
My main suggestion would be to allow the tempo to ebb and flow a bit. Let the emotions breathe.
Also, is there a reason why you finished the beautiful solo violin line with the fifth of the chord as opposed to reaching up for that gorgeous final root note? Maybe Hollywood Solo Violin doesn't go that high, I don't know.
But apart from that - lovely!
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Old 04-11-2018, 03:27 PM
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Thanks for the comments! Listening to it again, the tempo is pretty stagnant so I appreciate that comment. Unfortunately, HW Solo violin doesn't have the range necessary to get back up to the root so the fifth had to do. Thanks again for the feedback, I'll put it to good use!
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