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Old 09-07-2018, 08:15 PM
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Default Op.2 "Ad Planetae"

Hello.

Here is my second opus, with choirs, oriented on the solar system: https://soundcloud.com/the-edgy-peas...-2-ad-planetae

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Old 09-11-2018, 03:21 AM
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Hello Ryan

This is really unexpected and has some cool moves !
You should work on the mix, though. It's a huge part of arrangement and composition as well when you work in the box.

Here, your mids seem to be really "off" in the mix, and middle frequencies are fundamental to the human ear.
It sounds like you filtered the master with a phone effect.

Which DAW do you use ?

The drums are also a little harsh with this punky groove. You might try to give it a more "techno" or electronica sound in my opinion.

It's always nice
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